Unexpected festive mess we sing into the night,
I hear a happy siren song entwine around my own,
Smiling laughter, perfume lingers, warm around my neck,
I turn and see her, heartbeat drumming loudly in my chest,
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Joyful souls adrift and singing high atop the world, Our voices happy, harmonies like nothing ever heard, ..///
Celebrating with friends a special event, an excellent poem with a tinge of humor, CONGRATULATIONS being chosen TWICE as The member Poem Of The Day. Hurray! The text added here is also attractive and loveliest, written on a special blue. While reading the poem, we can feel the enjoyment amongst friends. A 10 Full Score for this impressing poem. God´s Blessings for you Craig.
Remarkable poem, each line and each stanza very well worded. Images swim out... reminders of happy times spent with friends! 10+
Much evocative imagery to evoke the season and its remembrances... well done...
Smiling laughter, perfume lingers, warm around my neck, I turn and see her, heartbeat drumming loudly in my chest, realising i am where i am supposed to be. thank u for this poem. very good poem. tony
And now, the twinkling tender glow of fireside calls us home, Steaming tea and toasted feet, our memories unbound, Distant wisdom, Childish laughter, longing to be free, Realising, Finally, I'm where I need to be.....so touching and impressive expression. A beautiful poem is well executed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the member poem of the POD.
A beautifully written poem, painting a clear image of a special friendship x
And now, the twinkling tender glow of fireside calls us home, Steaming tea and toasted feet, our memories unbound, Distant wisdom, Childish laughter, longing to be free, Realising, Finally, I'm where I need to be. ...... greatly penned, congrats and thanks for sharing
Enjoying life to the fullest. A beautiful poem indeed. The flow is amazing. Deserved to be poem of the day. Congrats.
thank you kindly dear friend, all these beautiful words have healed my soul
There is a rhythm to each quatrain that links so well with the joyfulness of friends together and ending with the rhymed couplet: 'Finally I'm where I need to be.'
Realizing finally, I am where I need be. Beautiful poem. Congrats on Poem of the Day.
A lovely write of singing and being with fiends at a joyous time? .......well penned Craig
written lovely all in friendly kingdom of happy Finally, Here all we where need to be.
We all need friends. Congratulations on the selection as member poem of the day!
Joyful souls adrift and singing high atop the world, Our voices happy, harmonies like nothing ever heard, .../// written beautifully on the tone of friendship