Sunday, October 7, 2018

Friends. Comments

Rating: 4.6

Unexpected festive mess we sing into the night,
I hear a happy siren song entwine around my own,
Smiling laughter, perfume lingers, warm around my neck,
I turn and see her, heartbeat drumming loudly in my chest,
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Craig H. Stewart
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Mahtab Bangalee 26 October 2019

Joyful souls adrift and singing high atop the world, Our voices happy, harmonies like nothing ever heard, .../// written beautifully on the tone of friendship

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 October 2019

Joyful souls adrift and singing high atop the world, Our voices happy, harmonies like nothing ever heard, ..///

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 October 2019

Celebrating with friends a special event, an excellent poem with a tinge of humor, CONGRATULATIONS being chosen TWICE as The member Poem Of The Day. Hurray! The text added here is also attractive and loveliest, written on a special blue. While reading the poem, we can feel the enjoyment amongst friends. A 10 Full Score for this impressing poem. God´s Blessings for you Craig.

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C F 26 October 2019

Remarkable poem, each line and each stanza very well worded. Images swim out... reminders of happy times spent with friends! 10+

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Harley White 26 October 2019

Much evocative imagery to evoke the season and its remembrances... well done...

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 October 2019

Smiling laughter, perfume lingers, warm around my neck, I turn and see her, heartbeat drumming loudly in my chest, realising i am where i am supposed to be. thank u for this poem. very good poem. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 October 2019

And now, the twinkling tender glow of fireside calls us home, Steaming tea and toasted feet, our memories unbound, Distant wisdom, Childish laughter, longing to be free, Realising, Finally, I'm where I need to be.....so touching and impressive expression. A beautiful poem is well executed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the member poem of the POD.

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Kim Barney 26 October 2019

Congrats for having this chosen AGAIN as poem of the day!

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Craig H. Stewart 22 June 2020

i had no idea

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Sharena Lee Satti 29 August 2019

A beautifully written poem, painting a clear image of a special friendship x

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Muzahidul Reza 27 October 2018

And now, the twinkling tender glow of fireside calls us home, Steaming tea and toasted feet, our memories unbound, Distant wisdom, Childish laughter, longing to be free, Realising, Finally, I'm where I need to be. ...... greatly penned, congrats and thanks for sharing

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 October 2018

Enjoying life to the fullest. A beautiful poem indeed. The flow is amazing. Deserved to be poem of the day. Congrats.

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Craig H. Stewart 26 October 2018

thank you kindly dear friend, all these beautiful words have healed my soul

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Dave Walker 26 October 2018

A good poem of the day, good friends are hard to come by.

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Craig H. Stewart 26 October 2018

thank you for the lovely comment: D

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Carl Roussell 26 October 2018

A well deserved Poem of the Day

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Craig H. Stewart 26 October 2018

thank you!

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Adrian Flett 26 October 2018

There is a rhythm to each quatrain that links so well with the joyfulness of friends together and ending with the rhymed couplet: 'Finally I'm where I need to be.'

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Craig H. Stewart 26 October 2018

thank you for the lovely comment! [3

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 October 2018

Joyful souls adrift! ! Friends! Thanks for sharing.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 October 2018

Realizing finally, I am where I need be. Beautiful poem. Congrats on Poem of the Day.

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Tom Allport 26 October 2018

A lovely write of singing and being with fiends at a joyous time? .......well penned Craig

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 October 2018

written lovely all in friendly kingdom of happy Finally, Here all we where need to be.

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Kim Barney 26 October 2018

We all need friends. Congratulations on the selection as member poem of the day!

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