Thursday, January 9, 2014

Friends Comments

Rating: 4.2

My far flung friends
Like stars above
You sparkle through the night
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Beach Girl
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Sochukwu Ivye 20 October 2017

Elegant homage to unmet friends. Good and effective application of simile, metaphor, and apostrophe, etc. You've mastered the perfect art of saying much in little words. Much kudos, dear.

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Unwritten Soul 22 August 2017

You know why stars are beautiful to your heart, because your heart like it glows and shine....honest heart deserves it :) This is such a beautiful and simple poem that require no expensive ink, but honest one...sparkling like the other ones!

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Shahin Latif 20 November 2015

Sweet poem. Thank you so much.

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Roseann Shawiak 01 September 2015

Like far-flung friends sparkling through the night, so is this gem of a poem to all who read it. Lovely poem, thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Lusciously sweet for your beautiful poem

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Kelly Kurt 30 March 2015

Thank you for sharing this poem I enjoyed it Peace.

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Bri Edwards 09 June 2014

don't you have telephones? ? thanks for sharing. well thought out. and nice rhyme. gee, it just occurred to me; do you mean PH friends? we may not share phone numbers, but many are available here! i've got to go to bed soon, but hopefully you can find a sparkle or two in my poems whenever you care to look. you brighten up our lives as well. bri :)

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April Hester 17 March 2014

Well said. This one is short but sweet.

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Oliver Ovid 02 March 2014

Friggin' pretty good. Ovid (my ancestor) would be proud. Nice work.

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Sekharan Pookkat 14 February 2014

unreachable.but reachable- how/

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Goldheart Bird 10 February 2014

Very pretty, I get annoyed sometimes when there are long poems. Like Cassandra said, ''it holds a lot of meaning''. : D

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Khairul Ahsan 24 January 2014

Your poem, and the note, is very warm, just as the poet! Thank you.

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Cassandra Jasmine 16 January 2014

Beautiful! Despite it being short (I, really, don't have a high preference for long poems!) , it holds a lot of meaning. :)

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Savita Tyagi 14 January 2014

Lovely poem. In today's world far flung friends are closer. Beautiful analogy. Thanks for sharing.

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Marcus Mckinley 10 January 2014

a very calming succinct poem. i like it

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Shahzia Batool 09 January 2014

an apt expression of far flung friends like stars above for the internet friends...so delicate beach girl!

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