Friends Comments

Greatly blessed by this

Its pleasure to read this piece of an art....

I really enjoyed this piece! Especially the line The bones of hardship shall they with you swallow Vey much liked how you phrased that! :)

Friends...what can we do without their existence? Love the way you 'rhyme' and your careful choice of words.

Astonishing comments on this! To plagiarise 'words that tear and strain to rhyme' sum it up for me, it reads like a bad translation.

This is a refreshing joyous piece by the end which is where it matters, when we may sit in the comfort, a friend blanket brings...lovely and i think your friend must be really chuffed with this poem....tyvm..karen

i like ur imagination friend....! ! u are really inspiring and ur best friend is really lucky to have such a gr8 poet as her friend.. anyways all the best..!

A fine dedication...Thank you for the breakdown of the lexia you employed in the work that in other languages might have a different meaning. I like the rhyme-schemeyou constructed...~FjR~