Sunday, October 18, 2009

Friends Comments

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Yulissa Fregoso
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Afzal Shauq 06 September 2010

sweet write in your little age..great.it means you are quite talented..thanks for sharing your words

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bye bye... bye bye 27 October 2009

Yes, that´s what friends are for, Yulissa! Very nice writing!

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Patti Masterman 25 October 2009

Nice style and lots of understanding. Thanks Yulissa.

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Afzal Shauq 24 October 2009

impressive piece of writing...meaningful..10/10

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John Knight 24 October 2009

Hi Yulissa - This is a lovely PROSE POEM and it expresses the importance of FRIENDS in a very fragrant way. Your ending is a wonderful revelation for one so young - probably because you are a Clever California Girl! I score your Poem - TEN. Love in poetry - JOHN

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