Sunday, September 6, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

As we sat on the hilltop
Looking down over the dales
The sky is blue
But, a few clouds shadowed the vales
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Allie Lusha
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Daniel Blevins 28 September 2009

This, i think is my favorite poem ever! Honestly, it is one of the best I have ever read! It reminds of me of so many times when I was with friends that I was very fond of and very happy to be with, and they were just troubled or preoccupied or something. And I would just wish that I could make them as happy as they make me, that they could appreciate this moment together as much as I did. Amazing job Allie! You are one of my favorite poets! : D ~

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Like the lines that made you frown I look your way And you turn to me and say My god what a beautiful day Look a Skylark I smile darn timezones I wish I could've stayed on and read all of your poems... some serious wordsmithery here

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