Empty fields, deserted concrete
all that is left in this barren place.
There's nothing
I hold dear, nothing.
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awesome... another great talent.. you gotz some.
Good emotion mixed with mystery. Put together very well. Your choice of words mixed with questions is a good combination. Makes for good reading. DC
Daryl, For a young writer, you certainly have a way with words. This is another champion verse, well done. Frank
ah friends are so dear you know but when they depart it is really hard to have them back againg it is life you meet someone love and appreciate him or her then after after you finish fo instance study with he or she left and you stay with no friends it is so hard because they r so dear and precious thanx for the lovely poem love it regards
wow. it has been on my favourite poems list for a while now. I just read it again. It's beautiful.