Saturday, August 15, 2009

Friends? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Empty fields, deserted concrete
all that is left in this barren place.
There's nothing
I hold dear, nothing.
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Daryl lyraD
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blank blank 22 November 2009

wow. it has been on my favourite poems list for a while now. I just read it again. It's beautiful.

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awesome... another great talent.. you gotz some.

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Catrina Heart 21 August 2009

loved this poem so interesting to read! ! ! 10+++

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Deborah Cromer 20 August 2009

Good emotion mixed with mystery. Put together very well. Your choice of words mixed with questions is a good combination. Makes for good reading. DC

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Frank Lambert 15 August 2009

Daryl, For a young writer, you certainly have a way with words. This is another champion verse, well done. Frank

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Passionate Flower 15 August 2009

ah friends are so dear you know but when they depart it is really hard to have them back againg it is life you meet someone love and appreciate him or her then after after you finish fo instance study with he or she left and you stay with no friends it is so hard because they r so dear and precious thanx for the lovely poem love it regards

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