Monday, September 19, 2011

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It’s been said that love is blind,
An understatement, I’ve lost my mind
To care for you, after all you’ve done,
Burning alive, still I reach for the sun
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Joyce Rugg
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Vipins Puthooran 01 October 2011

Poignant write... Some rhyme patterns are excellent...Nice expressions.i like this poem very much

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wow! this poem is so depressing but so beautiful. i felt each piece of; pain, i have gone through that and i have been facing that all my life. way to go. very impressive. we learn from the things thsat knock us down and give us pain. well done.

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