Wednesday, January 25, 2006

Friendless And Hopeless Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have no home, no place in this grim dark city,
Where I may lay my head but the stinking gutter.
I am alone, unloved, with neither hope nor faith.
My worthless life is just one long disaster,
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Edna Sweetlove
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Peter The Poet 10 March 2021

I laughed a lot at this.

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Rupa U 14 January 2009

This poem should serve as a lesson to die-hard alcoholics.

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Michael Gale 29 January 2006

I have just reread this piece. It is excellent(about an alcoholic wanting to do suicide due to depression) .

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Michael Gale 25 January 2006

Depression is man and woman's most unneeded disease, I pray to God to heal all your pain and anguish, to finally for you to be well and happily pleased!

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***** ********* 25 January 2006

A great write Edna. I was captivated by the extreme poverty you describe. 10 from Tai

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