Sunday, June 21, 2009

Friendless Comments

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i sit by the phone, but no one calls
not a soul, not even a single one
then a realization upon me falls
i got no friends, i'm friendless, of course!
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Sneha Murali
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Ted M 02 July 2009

Cheer up Lady! All are poem hunters are your friends; Cos your writings are so sweet and great work. Once the world knows it Dhamal hojayega. Good work Poet

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Shekhar Joshi 02 July 2009

good one..........sad theme though.........i think there can't be any reader of this poem who will not sympathize with the 'i' in your poem.........i guess i don't agree with your definition of friend as 'i got no one to understand me as a whole no one to connect....body, mind and soul'......... good work though....... ;)

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