Tuesday, August 9, 2011

Friend Vs. Fiend Comments

Rating: 5.0

The rope all worn and I hold on
Hands brushed and bruised
Red streaks of pain call a silent tear
Cringe alone as they stand by
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Hirushi Jayasekera
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David Harris 14 August 2011

A very engaging poem with a lot of thought going into each line. Unusual title that holds a gem of a poem and thoughtful message. Thank you for sharing it with us. David

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