Sunday, November 22, 2009

Friend Under The Carpet Comments

Rating: 5.0

I did not respect my round friend adequately
Also has forgotten that he everywhere was with me...
Long expected which the sweet minute under a carpet,
To prove to me friendship and fidelity, the turn waited...
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Tsira Gogeshvili
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David Harris 22 November 2009

Tsira, I loved the twist in the tail of this poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us my friend. Hugs David

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