When you can't hold back the tears
From streaming down your face
The rain comes to the rescue
Saving you from appearing blue.
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'The rain comes to the rescue Saving you from appearing blue' - so often it is true, and so wonderfully said!
Well written! I like how rain become the protector of tears!
I like how rain has become the protector for tears! Love this poem!
Wonderful friendship in this beautiful poem. The rain is also my friend in the context of watering my plants...
a nice combination of human feelings with rain, , , , , really a good work, , , , , , ,
marvellous writing it brings out the truth behind us hiding behind our fake smiles pretending everything's ok
Nice, nice piece...wonderful write.. makes me ponder the story of rain and my friend.. my friend and his friend the rain
From hair down to your cheek No one will know you're weak The rain comes to the rescue Saving you from the public view. I like this stanza... this said it all... love this poem...
nice poem I like it...if only the rain were to fall everytime we cry and no one would know to misinterpret our tears.
nice poem I like it...if only the rain were to fall everytime we cry and no one would know to misinterpret our tears.
nice poem I like it...if only the rain were to fall everytime we cry and no one would know to misinterpret our tears.
nice poem I like it...if only the rain were to fall everytime we cry and no one would know to misinterpret our tears.
this poem is filled with substance and cohesiveness. like the aspects it expressed. the first stanza is a nice touch.
one of your favorite, if i may say...looking forward for poems talking about, your coffee.noodles.lemon.eggs. you love those things before i just don't know now....just correct me if I'm wrong..
An amazing poem, dear ate Naida...10+++