Friend Or Foe Comments

At this age infatuation is mistaken as friendship or love that needs caution. CP

Writing this poem seems like the product of a raw wide range of feelings that need to be distilled into a more fluid, deeper sense of what it is that's important about trust and the test of time. When you write out your words - always take a measure of how much inner perspective can applied to competing forces from outer presures that you may need more time to evaluate. You're effort is on the right track though.

beautifully penned dear.... yes its true feelings

Dear very good poem keep it up 10plus

that was by me but i was on kyrstens poem thingy snap snap perfect 10