Thursday, April 24, 2008

Friend Or Foe Comments

Rating: 5.0

Does twilight surrender us to these games?
Or has fate tried to make right what was wrong
Shall destiny rewrite our names?
Is this were we belong?
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Patricia Gale
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Charles M Moore 14 June 2008

One of your best Patricia.Much appreciated.

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This deep poem, so rich in feeling, about two opposites deserves this quotation by Shakespeare. If not Juliet, who can say: ' My only love, sprung from my only hate! / Too early seen unknown, and known too late! / Prodigious birth of love it is to me/ That I must love a loathed enemy.'?

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Broken Peaces 25 April 2008

The pen is mightier than the sword So foe beware This lady is much loved And has many friends out there Lovely write Patricia 10 Chris

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That last stanza is a succinct question-begging gentle punch; pensive, flowing, lovely to read as ever P. t x

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Abha Sharma 24 April 2008

fate overtakes us before our will destiny accompanies the painful twitch dream fulfils the band and smile but from a distance…. friend or foe still a mystery...... so well expressed…

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