Wednesday, October 5, 2016

Friend In Deed Comments

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You call me when in need
You chat with me when in need
I receive your call to act on deed
When will you call in deed?
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Rose Kanana
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Judy Ndungu 12 October 2016

The needs always outshine the deeds...some of us cannot tell the difference. Great piece.

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Rose Kanana 04 November 2016

Hehehe auntie Kalady! ! don't we all identify with it? ? ? needs vs deeds...deeds vs needs. Thanks for passing by to comment.

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Judy Muthuri 06 October 2016

Really great piece of reality. Telling as it is.

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Charity Karimi 05 October 2016

nicely written poem-it takes guts to tell friends what they are

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 05 October 2016

Really, a real friendship should be more of deeds without monetary rewards after deeds. For friends are friends in need and deed Deeds speak louder Deeds complement true friendship - I loved these lines. Thanks for sharing Rose.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 October 2016

A friend indeed! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Ruth Nyokabi 05 October 2016

As usual the poetess has not minced her words which are quite powerful. i like the honesty in this poem in letting friends know that they need not be a burden. Thanks for sharing Rose.

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Collins Waswa 05 October 2016

Straight to the point....no room for vagueness.

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James Mwenda 05 October 2016

Very forthright poem, you have addressed what many may not want to tell friends

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