Wednesday, January 11, 2012

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I thought I could find you here without hope and all alone.
When will you wake to find what your running from is gone.
Is this what your folks would choose for you think this brings a smile.
After all these years you would think, take stock after awhile.
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jack green
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Sara Fielder 26 January 2012

the only thing you've gained is a masters in pain and hurt....intelligent, well thought out line.

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Asif Andalib 14 January 2012

Thought-provoking poem. I like it. Thanks for sharing.

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Wahab Abdul 12 January 2012

this is really a good poem i like the poem....good theme..texture of the poem is also good...please read my poem

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jack green

jack green

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