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why didn't they restore the angel, back to angelic nakedness? K P i give up. i'll read another from you. bri ;) C O F G S

There is a wonderful quality to this poem....there's something that carries the reader between consciousness and the dream state. As we are lulled to sleep, we often experience rather vivid, often unpleasant images....but that is nature, part of life. It's that state, that twilight, you capture here. An amazing poem. A 10.

Wow you are a great writer, what a great descriptive poem!

WOW. I love your poem Fabrizio. Certainly food for thought. Many humans do not like vivid graphic images of mortality and it's entailing unpleasantness of decay. They prefer to see only the shiny side of the coin. I see both as a consequence of life on earth.

I read this poem there times and I realized it a amazing poem.. Thank you dear poet :)

This was kind of amazing. I love the mix of poetry and science and how your experience must affect how you personally view the world. I love nature poetry and the interaction across KPCOFGS... Your notes were helpful as well. Allot of depth here and just beauty in the words themselves and the imagery... Yes.. It was beautiful or at least natural and real...even the maggots! Oh... And BTW... Viva Italia... Pennetta and Vinci made me smile too.

Thought-inciting poem. Love how you combine words: Cheerful and melodious warble, sounds very musical. Also love the line: independent world- realm of alien species. You can interpret that in various ways. Enjoyed the poem. Excellent.

Two things up front - I really love Masaccio's EXPLUSION - the sheer grief of Adam and Eve he captures should melt the heart of any divine being. But alas, justice trumps mercy. Second, this is a clever, witty poem. And I can completely understand that flight from the GARDEN environment because the WHOLE CYCLE OF NATURE includes birth - growth - maturity (no problems so far, but then -) - decay - dissolution - death. It's those last three after the arc that makes us squeamish and flee the stench and ruin of what earlier in its life's arc was lovely. As T, S, Eliot put in one of his poems, HUMANKIND CANNOT BEAR TOO MUCH REALITY. Amen to that.

Wow wow this is a chêf d'oeuvre! Par excellence in terminology, an intellectual poem ah! I admire how u employd the garden of Eden in it and the last line is also great. I hope u got my poem mail xmas greet reply.

the title of the poem is really intriguing/interesting and funny in the same time. Very good verses. Bravo!

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That attracts your eyes. Really wonderful poem shared on. Beautiful realization.