Saturday, February 15, 2020

Friday The Thirteenth.... Comments

Rating: 4.3

My thoughts go back to the time that I have just arrived in the Netherlands.
We live in Leiden at that time.
On the coffee, asked by my neighbour.
She also said that she has invited a few other ladies.
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Budhashaya Behera 19 February 2020

A mother's traveling memory is still alive with her affectionate second cute son. I truly love this poem. This is very beautiful. Your son's photo is so cute. I am sending blessings for him....10++

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Akhtar Jawad 18 February 2020

To write a poem on the memories of the past is always a lovely work. If you start believing in a superstition you are unconsciously affected by it. But if you don't believe in it cannot make any harm to you. A nice poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 February 2020

The past memories on the arrival to the Netherlands are fathered and this poem is beautifully penned. Ladies with toddler has joined at that time for morning coffee. You had seen the deer. Toddler enjoyed a lot. Your second son was born on Friday the Thirteenth, a very healthy child. You still remember all these days. A mother's great affection is reflected in this lovely poem. We are wishing all the best to your youngest son. Thank you very much for sharing this.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 February 2020

Such a beautiful poem has a very nice and interesting featured photo of your child baby and beauty of motherhood is well reflected in this interesting innocent poem. I need this to read thoroughly and review. Like other poems of yours, this also deserves full 10 point and I have already rated this. After few minutes I should five my feedback to this poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 16 February 2020

(13-unlucky/ superstition) Some believe this is unlucky because one of those thirteen, Judas Iscariot, was the betrayer of Jesus Christ. From the 1890s, a number of English language sources relate the " unlucky" thirteen to an idea that at the Last Supper, Judas, the disciple who betrayed Jesus, was the 13th to sit at the table.//googly

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 February 2020

A poem on superstition, a great anecdotal narrative style, inference left with the readers, another novelty, the result is lovely.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 February 2020

A wonderful poem....brilliantly penned and amazingly shared! Stay always happy, healthy and blessed!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 February 2020

Thank you so much for your precious visit and excellent responses: your brilliant comments and valuable compliments. God's Blessings.

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