Thursday, September 21, 2006

Friday's Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

Friday evening comes again, the fading light
As summer falls towards the winter's arms
The birds adjust their song to Sabbath tones
From branches clothed in leaves just clinging on
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Frank Bana
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Ruby Root 25 September 2006

Hi Frank, Your a beautiful poet. It almost sad in ways when I read this, but there is beauty in your writing. Tenderness does warm the heart Frank. I believe it does. Excellent poem.

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Marilyn Shepperson 21 September 2006

Brilliant poem, extremely well written. Marilyn

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