Friday, June 24, 2005

Friday Morning Comments

Rating: 4.6

A blank wall the ugly color of dust
Two drain pipes covered in pigeon droppings and rust
I roll down the shutters to keep Friday morning out
The humid air, the children who swear and the parents that shout.
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Ghada Shahbender
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Ernestine Northover 02 October 2005

What a lovely poem, enjoyed every line. Sincerely Ernestine Northover

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Uriah Hamilton 30 June 2005

a well-written poem with a lovely feeling about it.

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Max Reif 24 June 2005

Your details are wonderfully chosen, Ghada. It's so readable, and, well, real. I came to every rhymed couplet, hoping that it would be as good as the last. And it was! I'm not sure who Kika is..the parrot?

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Michael Shepherd 24 June 2005

It's like one of our newspapers advertises - 'All human life is there'... and somehow, it makes us feel better just to read it...

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 24 June 2005

They grow up too quick! good job!

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Ghada Shahbender

Ghada Shahbender

Cairo, Egypt
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