Monday, August 3, 2020

Freudian Slip Comments

Rating: 5.0


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M.J. Lemon
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Mj Lemon 14 September 2020

Thank you, Kevin! Your comment- priceless, and almost a perfect senryu.

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Kevin Patrick 11 September 2020

You might keep yours dropped but if I saw a women like that my jaws on the floor.

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Mj Lemon 09 September 2020

Saved by that face mask! ! Thank you for reading, Soul!

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Unwritten Soul 06 September 2020

Even if it revealing, your mouth shut or not... Face mask still on... 😆

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Mj Lemon 21 August 2020

Richard, Yes! Marilyn, Tom, and that walk down a NY street after The Creature from the Black Lagoon. Just brilliant, Richard! Thanks so much.

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Richard Wlodarski 18 August 2020

Freud would have a field day with you, my friend. Conjures up the unforgettable Marilyn Monroe! An absolutely brilliant Senryu that had me in stitches!

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Mj Lemon 17 August 2020

Susan, thank you so much! Serenity and senryu, I think you are suggesting they may pair so well...thanks again.

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Susan Williams 16 August 2020

I always knew you were an intelligent man.... they are the ones who can enjoy scenery without jumping up and down and shouting and pointing! By the way, senryu becomes you! As do many other styles, but I find brevity is a hard accomplishment to conquer and you do it as easily as breathing. Excellent and worthy of an abundance of dancing 10+++++++++++++++

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Mj Lemon 16 August 2020

Thank you Poet, S, zaynab...words do fail...If it were a decision to make, there would would no slips....

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 August 2020

ASK HER TO TAKE IT OFF THE WORLD MUST ENJOY HER MORE THAN POETRY ALONE MJL MISSED YOU U DON'T NOW COME ALONG WATCHING HER LINGERIE FALL MAY BE MJL WE LOVE YOU AND HER ALL

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 August 2020

Oooh sassy and sensational, makes me think it slipped or a slip. Thumbs up! Plz do read and comment your thoughts on my newest prose titled, " face veils/face masks same thing " as it fosters an understanding of the shared veiling practice btw east and west since history.

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Mj Lemon 06 August 2020

Robert, LeeAnn, Kostas and Asim...thank you so much for the positive comments and...entertaining observations! Thanks again.

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M Asim Nehal 03 August 2020

Great observation that silenced you. I see a satire and humor both in your 3 lines.10++

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Kostas Lagos 03 August 2020

Excellent! Just excellent M.J!

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Leeann Azzopardi 03 August 2020

I get that way when I see a naked or near naked man. Bravo!

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