Fresh In A New Cast Comments

Philosophical poetry! Congratulations!

Great write with powerful expressions.

So materialistic this world has become that hardly man has time to look back on things right or wrong with he has been involved since and peace becomes a mirage to him and when he is awake to the fact he goes into introspection.........Valsa.....a great piece of poetry.....10/10

Valsa, This is a good piece of poetry

A lovely write up confessing the truth. Yes mostly, we all are so tired in this complicated world that we need a break. Because after running a long way the rats also are fed up now. We seek a life with no more sins and pains.... very nicely expressed. You can read my Enjoy being a complete you.

Poem with a great meaning. At the end of the day, especially very late he realizes that what ever he earned he could buy everything with it, except the joy...Worth reading it. Loved it.

life is a gift of God and must be enjoyed.... we must also taste the bitter face of it God wish so Polluting my larynx and lungs, Eject out the venom through my fangs, Douse the heat and drive the thirst

Awake you find the morning, life is such if one line is grasped by mind a lot of change can be brought 10 so lovely Valsa worth reading thank a lot peace be upon you and your family and all those who read

Dear Patricia! Am too much obliged for the kind of comments you make and let me make an open acknowledgement of it! You try to understand each poem from all possible angles and make comments which are very deep, erudite, mature and mind blowing! I feel that you never simply skim through a poem, but carefully sit and read, taking time to let the contents sink down into the bottom of your heart! Your observations will make anyone feel big and important! Always enjoy reading your comments on other poets also! I know, you have a big heart! Thank you for all great comments!

Life has all kinds of twists and ups and downs. We sometimes wish for a rebirth that we may change things that have bought us pain and heartaches. It all boils down to having health instead of wealth, gain instead of pain, peace of mind instead of giving someone a piece of ours. Excuse the pun. Let us be ourselves then we don't ever have to worry about the great unmasking. Very inspiring. Thank you for this inspiring write.

Powerful imaginativ poem! To b put into a new cast, ah, challenging. Dis was such a cutting swordy metaphor, awesome to d core. Warm wishes

On this stage where we have been cast For too many roles to play Ours is not to remember the good old past And seek early exit today But He who wrote the script will decide Being born, when each of us will die And back stage congratulate or admonish us How we played our part in the worldly set......... Good poem Madam - set me thinking on these lines.....

You have presented the bitter truth in ground breaking style dear mam. I haven't yet reached evening of my life but then wish to go back to childhood to enjoy it to the fullest once again and so those who have already reached the evening of their life definitely wish much more.... Wonderful read mam!

Beautiful poem expressing desire to fit into new cast. Thank you.

This is an outstanding poem of yours read till date by me. The desired to get another birth to set things right which have gone wrong in the present one is well structured and beautifully worded as the poet feels caged in this present life....... How I wish to curl unobtrusive Into the womb that bore me once To be reborn once more as my old self To enjoy the peace and bliss, now alien! As trees bared by the winter blasts Stay in wait for the spring to arrive I await a life, fresh and new And long like a bird, freed from its cage To soar into the panorama of the blue............excellent.10.

Dear Jahan, I am taken by surprise to see you after such a long lapse, equally delighted by your generous words of praise! Whether I deserve this or not, I accept your compliments with grace and THANK YOU so much! !

Visiting after a long time. Whenever I visit your page I really get something. I can't make any of your stanzas my favorite in this particular piece for each stanza is a pearl. The thought in each stanza is mind blowing. You are an amazing writer. I really like the twists in certain lines and the selection of words to sound more powerful and authentic. My world has lost its tint and throb. Defeated and decimated, Just brilliant. and the last stanza sums up all.

An amazing poem.... inner peace is hard to find... specially with the kind of lifestyle we are leading....

To restore all that slipped through my fingers In the tangled labyrinthine paths of life! How I wish to curl unobtrusive Into the womb that bore me once love of life and money not make to love the real life..... really we feel it, when we try to earn money and we loose our life time to enjoy

ufffff what a powerful write Mam............simply loved the lines............. How I wish to curl unobtrusive Into the womb that bore me once To be reborn once more as my old self To enjoy the peace and bliss, now alien!