Friday, August 19, 2022

Fresh As May Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was born in everlasting springtime, as happenstance often does to others,
Like natural green halls wherein joy sings, to its wilder sisters and brothers.

I was situated in mellowed sunshine, like a colorful ship on the bronzed sea,
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
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Richard Wlodarski 24 August 2022

Truly a masterpiece. An absolutely terrific tribute to Mother Nature. Such beautiful vivid imagery. A joy to read, Evelyn!

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Ruta Mohapatra 21 August 2022

While local nimble squirrels scampered feverishly, busily going everywhere, Like the blurred hands of a gilded clock, ticking off eternity from anywhere...beautiful!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 21 August 2022

Thank you for your kind comment, Ruta.

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Nabakishore Dash 20 August 2022

Outstanding write with wonderful imagery.Keep writing please.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 20 August 2022

Thank you for your touching, appreciative remarks. I will never stop writing.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 20 August 2022

Wonderous account on the most beautiful season Bravo!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 20 August 2022

Thank you for your valued comment.

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s.zaynab kamoonpury 20 August 2022

You took me back to my childhood when we lived among more greenery and bowery garden. Your descriptions and imagery all so richly wonderful. Kudos! Plz also read and comment my newest poem titled, 'In and out the lusty nil wedding bells '

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 20 August 2022

Thank you so much for your kind thoughts. I definitely will be reading your poem.

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Nosheen Irfan 20 August 2022

Great literary work! Imagery is superb. You never fail to inspire Evelyn! Full marks to you for stylistic, for observation, for imagination. This is really good poetry!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 20 August 2022

Thank you so much. Your appreciation delights me. I'm so glad you enjoyed this tale.

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