I was born in everlasting springtime, as happenstance often does to others,
Like natural green halls wherein joy sings, to its wilder sisters and brothers.
I was situated in mellowed sunshine, like a colorful ship on the bronzed sea,
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While local nimble squirrels scampered feverishly, busily going everywhere, Like the blurred hands of a gilded clock, ticking off eternity from anywhere...beautiful!
Outstanding write with wonderful imagery.Keep writing please.
Thank you for your touching, appreciative remarks. I will never stop writing.
You took me back to my childhood when we lived among more greenery and bowery garden. Your descriptions and imagery all so richly wonderful. Kudos! Plz also read and comment my newest poem titled, 'In and out the lusty nil wedding bells '
Thank you so much for your kind thoughts. I definitely will be reading your poem.
Great literary work! Imagery is superb. You never fail to inspire Evelyn! Full marks to you for stylistic, for observation, for imagination. This is really good poetry!
Thank you so much. Your appreciation delights me. I'm so glad you enjoyed this tale.
Truly a masterpiece. An absolutely terrific tribute to Mother Nature. Such beautiful vivid imagery. A joy to read, Evelyn!