Tuesday, August 30, 2005

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So many nights fill with tears of anger and agression
so many days with the same bland expression
Finding release in the pain that I could cause myself
believing in nothing else
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Arienne Smith
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Eric Kozlik 08 February 2007

Congratulations, you are one of the only people on this site that actually uses rhymes. I think it makes your writing poetry, not just oddly grouped words. Keep it up.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 30 August 2005

Wonderful piece. Healing is imminent!

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Arienne Smith

Arienne Smith

Oakland, California
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