Frenzied Light Comments

Congratulations for being chosen! 'But, there are things I ask of you' - the terms have been clealy stated afterwards. Love and passion so intense, so unique, particularly the last stanza!

Marvelous poem. Intense passion of heart wanting to love with her own terms displayed in every word. Congratulations and thanks for sharing.

Love, I will promise you a substitute. I could be that piece of holy camphor So safely locked away from prying hands. And dearest, when I burn for you, that single time Nothing shall remain of me, or of you, except that flash Of memory. Our blending shall be so sublime, so intense, so total.- - - - A feeling of deep love where lover wants to be one with love, - - - there would be no separate existence of love and lover.

'Come, consume me, Devastate me love, if you ever will, But with a force that I will forever remember.'.. is the gist. Invite love to consume your heart. That is beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

'Nothing shall remain of me'! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

The fullness and depth of feelings and thoughts of frenzied outbursts of love well told touchingly..........thanks for sharing

Meena, such a lovely write... congrats for being chosen... a highest 10+++