French Fries Or French Kiss? Comments

I don't need either, would go for Blood - Kidding.

AND I applaud you for giving yourself stars; I give myself some at times, but usually not 'right away'. If we don't advertise our 'work' it may NEVER be read! ! : (

Some word associations in the poem don't thrill me, but your topics are appropriate: ' humorous, nonsense'. 4 stars. bri : )

I just CAN'T THINK of two tongues groping one another as being a 'romantic rendezvous', though I appreciate the r-r alliteration, and what might follow French Kissing! ! I mean, OF COURSE, ice cream. ;)))

I can't say I've ever been a fan of ANY kisses, except chocolate (Hershey's) Kisses! I've a poem about a chocolate kiss. Kiss With A Twist. : )

end of line 4: I'd replace 'it meets' with 'tongues meet'. Actually I'd much rather eat ice cream than tongues. 'Where WAS that tongue earlier? ?

I don't have teeths to enjoy french fries the other one is Okey with me.