French Fries.. Comments

I have come across this eerie poem of your sweet hands, I mean sweet wet pen. Sharpest satirical poem, I truly enjoyed.

Ha ha can a poem be made on this subject as well and you did it wonderfully.

Interesting poem. Nicely written Asim Ji.

Marvelous poem, nice piece Man..100.

Beautiful ironical description

Such a brilliant poem, God bless u Asimji

Immaculate writing man....10

Enjoyed the biting satire in this! One day they will be made french fries! But the question remains..... why innocents are are brutally killed!

Don’t provoke the fools nor try to teach them anything They are self-sufficient for self-destruction- - - - well depicted.Thanks.

A very well written, satirical piece, Mohammed. Thanks

Wait and watch their game, which they try One day they will cut themselves and will make French fries. Through satire you really made a point. We have to wait for that day when they will destruct themselves.

Feel the heartache in your words. Life should just be LIVING for us all. Sadly it is not. Thank you

very sad but that's the way they will continue until they self destruct but unfortunately they will take many innocent with them thanksAsim