Freezing Cold Comments

Everyone has begun to experience the onslaught of winter and in some places it is already freezing cold! Well composed!

You wrote this poem before with few changes in word present again in a new form. Very creative. Nice to see both versions.

where's the mirror of thine where in I can find a face like mine/// am a mirror where a reflection of inter-soul! - self existence being disappeared!

You have very well described the freezing cold along the riverside. I liked in fact your conceptualization of a successful person as reaching heights like river water leaving the banks behind but then she swims back to bank to make it revive. I'll see if some idea comes out of this imagination. Admirations.

Ups and downs come in the life with the changing weathers. Springs are ahead of a cold weather. A philosophic thought so nicely changed in a wonderful poem.