Freeze Withinme Poem by me poet yeps poet

Freeze Withinme

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I too will freeze
be frozen
like snowy trees

you leave all
on the far banks of the river
all alone
and all wish to go
along with you
ike a sculptured stone

where is the mirror
of thine
where in one can find
a face like mine

You are a renowned poet
all know
leaving us on the river banks
on the opposite side
just to glow

none can with out your help
survive
it's only mysurmise
'tis the losers enterprise
you swim back
do them surprise

Monday, September 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love,poem,poet,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 29 September 2020

Very well composed........thank u, dear poet.......anjandev roy.

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Varsha M 28 September 2020

and all wish to go along with you ike a sculptured stone...... beautiful poetic expression. where is the mirror of thine where in one can find a face like mine.... beautiful metaphorical expression. River water does sculptures it's stone and act as a mirror to show truth. Beautiful words.

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