Wednesday, September 19, 2018

Freeze This Time! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wish I could just stop this time,
Freeze it now and hold it tight,
For my son who has just turned three,
Where he knows no pain nor fret,
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Ashika Murali Acharya
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 September 2018

Typo...please treat both in stead of bot.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 September 2018

He learns every day in his own ways, That, all are alike -sweet and naive...fascinating expression! I admire adorable style of your penning.....10

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Unnikrishnan E S 27 September 2018

Marvellous poem on the thick bond between a mom and her child.Very vociferously and convincingly expressed. Let me quote Can I pause these moments of blissful glee When he charges his childhood spree And make this charm his identity.... Reading your lovely poem, I chanced to re-live my days when our daughter was of the same ages two or three... thank you Ashika. A 100 + for this piece of beauty. Onto MyPoemList

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 September 2018

Wow! Great poetry, Ashika. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 September 2018

your poetry is so wonderful and u give good comments kindly find some time to read mine two poems on moms and in advance thanks yes one posted to day on NIRVANA

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 September 2018

A child learns everyday many things and beautifully reflects joy. The sun and the snow bot shine in vision. Having a plan for ceasing time is amazing. A brilliant poem is beautifully penned...10

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