Monday, December 31, 2012

Freeze This Moment Comments

Rating: 5.0

We were sitting on your rooftop
Staring at the skies
The sun was dipping lower
I looked into your eyes
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Vizard Dhawan
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Hazel Durham 01 January 2013

Wow! This is just perfect with great rhythm and flow capturing the moments so beautifully and what a gem the last two lines are! ! Brilliant write! !

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Ketan Hukare 01 January 2013

Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! I liked it very much! My vote is 10

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Valsa George 31 December 2012

Wonderful Vizard! You are indeed a wizard, playing magic with verse! But is it not too early 'to freeze the moment'?

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