We were sitting on your rooftop
Staring at the skies
The sun was dipping lower
I looked into your eyes
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Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! I liked it very much! My vote is 10
Wonderful Vizard! You are indeed a wizard, playing magic with verse! But is it not too early 'to freeze the moment'?
Wow! This is just perfect with great rhythm and flow capturing the moments so beautifully and what a gem the last two lines are! ! Brilliant write! !