Friday, September 28, 2018

Freeze Comments

Rating: 4.8

Embrace the night
When nothing so bright
She will sing a lullaby
For you and the fireflies
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Rini Shibu
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Carl Roussell 31 October 2018

Such a good description of the rhythms of the night!

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Unnikrishnan E S 04 October 2018

Lovely poem and fantastic images....and a tickling rhyme scheme...

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Irfanulla Shariff 03 October 2018

Awesome imagery, fabulous rhyming scheme! Very well penned! Thanks for sharing, Rini.

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Kostas Lagos 29 September 2018

A beautiful poetic description of night.Thanks

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 September 2018

Rini, such a beautiful and lovely poem...................

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Lamar Cole 28 September 2018

This is a very nice and delightful poem about the night.

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M Asim Nehal 28 September 2018

Awesome, Fantastic line and great imagery... As stars twinkle across the miles Leaves rustle for the breeze And rhythm of night make me freeze

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