Freemysoul Comments

each time i read one of your pieces it gets better and better, i love your style. great work, amazing connection, rated it very high as well. your a awesome writer. wow, your brilliant and talented.

My dear sister, i think Gibson is correct, especialy about the first line...but i can feel that, the poem is from your heart..keep writing..Siya_! !

I think I know the sort of poem you strive to create. Some lines are fine others need a little more editing. here is also the chance you might be trying a little too hard. What might happen if you lost the first line: 'Of my soul to be free' I feel it is not needed. can you see why? Best