Thursday, October 6, 2011
Freefall Comments
Rating: ★4.5
Voices whisper, promising sweet sleep
I look, but see nothing in the deep
Nothing different from where I am now
The only change, it doesn’t bow
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Vipins Puthooran
06 October 2011
Excellent poem! The emotions of a heart before falling from our thoughts or life itself... Sometimes heart seems to be vacuum and thrust us to fall......well written
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7/27/2025 9:33:34 PM # 1.0.0
A struggle to differentiate the phony from the real, against all odds, the line 'Like someone has a gun to my head A false cheery voice, “be happy or you’re dead” ' is kinda funny plus is heavy with that message.... I also liked the ' In falling i rise' line, # motivating....