Thursday, September 3, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

rage was taken
stolen in the dead of night
to scared to fight
or put to flame
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Bryan Alexander
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Angel OfGod 03 November 2009

Not bad...the flow was steady, the rythm was on time, and the rhyme, except for a few repetitive words was fair. I did read in there quite a bit of personal struggles. It seemed only slightly obscured for rhyming purposes and overall I did connect with it. I think I would give it a more fitting title.

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Adens Kamwi 12 September 2009

Rhyme after Rhyme after Rhyme, good one

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Bryan Alexander

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