Wednesday, September 16, 2009

Freedom/Never Take It 4 Granted Comments

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A word, stating the way of one's life
a word we all just take for granted
until we are controlled, contained within bars and chains
our bodies trapped, our minds are on the brink of the insane
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Olympia Melone 11 December 2009

if youve ever been incarcerated or a pow, or taken hostage, or in a abusive relationship this is an excellent poem to reach out to your readers

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Allan Macli Borges 26 September 2009

i'm just amazed. it's really a profound reflection on our condition. well penned and full of meaning for me.10.

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Eyan Desir 17 September 2009

Good write.... Life is ugly 10ss

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