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Freedom Loves Trusts Builds Bridges Comments

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fear divides
it takes courage to take a leap of faith

love to walk in peace
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Terence George Craddock
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Terence Craddock 16 April 2023

P1 in an age of fashion trend materialism, must have shiny new gadgets, freedom can be pushed to the edges, while people in mass crowd queues follow pleasure pursuits in times of plenty,

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Terence Craddock 16 April 2023

P2 but when liberty is stolen poverty raises its head in hardship food shortages, freedom will generate a spot in the limelight due to the urgency necessity of the moment

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Denis Mair 16 April 2023

In an era that values freedom, those who push boundaries of thought will have confidence... their explorations will venture into unfrequented territory...laying tracks through the void. Somehow this chimes with your poem STEPPING OFF A SHEER DROP.

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Terence Craddock 16 April 2023

freedom risks trusting in people, knowing hurt pain betrayal are possible rewards, freedom invests time care love gifted to people, freedom must risk life liberty hardships, freedom is like stepping off a sheer drop, because freedom on the edge risks the sudden fall

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Terence Craddock 23 January 2024

I wrote the poems 'Freedom Risks Trusting In People' and 'Freedom At What Cost? ', inspired by my reply to a comment made on the poem 'Freedom Loves Trusts Builds Bridges', by the poet Denis Mair. Both poems are dedicated to Denis Mair.

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