Sunday, September 6, 2009

Freedom Is All I Want Comments

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Set me free set me free
I was never meant to be
Confined to a bird cage
In a concrete jungle
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Sandra Martyres
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Yelena M. 19 September 2009

I can absolutely relate to this poem..I loved the lines: 'You my dear, are also free to decide Whether you want to accompany me Or remain in this world of make believe..' Thanks for sharing, Sandra. Yelena M.

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Meggie Gultiano 19 September 2009

I hope this is only a muse, Sandra. But you have quite delivered this piece well. This is a thought provoking write.Take care of you always

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I hope my budgie poem has not affected you too much Sandra. Oh! I know the feeling of being restricted and wanting to branch out and discover what Mother Nature has to offer and not be stuck in a rut. We can be free in our imaginations though and I have enjoyed your poem's message and concept. 10 love Karin

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Rakesh Bedi 07 September 2009

What freedom you want, sandra? Everyone is in self-created cells. And it has become so much part of ones self that freedom at this juncture seems only a dream! ! !

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 06 September 2009

The feeling is alright, but can we live without the company of all these make-believe things? Solitude can be had anywhere in our own company and nature will appear there as a friend.

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Patti Masterman 06 September 2009

Humans seem most adaptable to becoming comfortable in their self made prisons. And also are good at caging other wild creatures longing for freedom. Your descriptions really say it all.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 06 September 2009

cable and internet has changed people's life style a lot..but this site..the things we gather and share here...the creativity we see here and the response we get within minutes makes it worthwile...and thro poetry we get to visualize a lot of beauty...a very vital subject told very well

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Ejaz Khan 06 September 2009

Your longing for freedom is understandable but remember you're prisoner of moderanity from which there's no escape now, but go on dreaming, it doesn't cost anything! A very thought provoking write!

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