Wednesday, June 21, 2017

Freedom Is A State Of Mind Comments

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I am a helpless bird in this cage
It is my home prison
And for no good reason
It is a half metre range
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Dr. Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek Mohammed
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Dr Antony Theodore 01 December 2018

When I beat my wings to fly To fathom the distant blue sky The thin wire will pull me down Back to my cage to drown In my rage......inspite of all that is negative i sing my song of freedom and love...... yes freedom is a state of mind...... but it is such a great ability to think and accept the situation like that.......... thank u dear poet. tony

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ahmed gumaa 01 December 2018

Thank you so much Dr. Tony.

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alan brown 24 April 2018

yes I agree with you that freedom is a state of mind Dr Ahmed. Even when we are imprisoned we still can escape in our minds. thank you enjoyed.Alan 10+

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 24 April 2018

Thank you so much, Alan that you have enjoyed my poem.

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Gumaa. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 18 August 2017

Thank you so much Jazib. I will read your poems.

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Bharati Nayak 17 August 2017

I care not for the cage I can live another age I do never look behind So I am always happy and free As freedom is a state of mind - - - - - - - So truly said.Freedom is a state of mind.

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 18 August 2017

Thanks Nayak.

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 June 2017

Beautiful poetry Sir. Yeah, freedom is a state of mind. The poem has an amazing flow and a nice message. thanks for sharing.10+++

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Thank you so much, Panda for your nice comment.

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