Freedom In Me Comments

Rachael: You do have a style all your own. You’re just beginning. You have so much of life to see and you will learn that you need not always write on the tired, puerile subject of love/love lost. I would like to see you diversify; I have a feeling you could soar. For a broader take on the subject of this one, see one by Maya Angelo called I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings. Then you will know what I mean when I say you can soar. Adeline

lush green bloom makes this talent lovable to poets She will never say a word Because the bird of freedom soars in his eyes She must not disturb A life

ur talent is amazing, ...i love it, ive never seen sumone which such...a Passion...rarely even understood, by great philosophers. I love it! ! I jus Love it!

poetry beyond your years.