Wednesday, October 11, 2006

Freedom From The Self Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thinking can never be free
Stems from the conditioning deep in our minds
Cultural...Social...Literary tree
Glued to us putting us in a bind
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Insightful, accurate and well-penned. t x

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Duncan Wyllie 14 October 2006

I have enjoyed the idea of emptying the mind of thought and filling it with a still- calmness for the soul to entune to A very enjoyable concept Love duncan X

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Catastrophe King 11 October 2006

Thinking minds..... what are those thoughts and where do they come from..... readings that we do and the education that we absorb from our life.... all this and more! Now, that can be a complex situation.... But, do we get confused asking all these questions? We still do continue to think and we still do try to assess the mind of ourselves and others....... T.O..... see what have you done to me? ..... You got the mind to think again. Good write.

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Geoff Warden 11 October 2006

T.O. a poem of deep thought that I have been robbed of my breath.....well skripted...

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Sridhar RVL 11 October 2006

Truth... which is like a thief creeping into a still night. This Poem appears like the thief above. congrats, here for your poetic pen to craft it in such a simplicity. Hope

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Marilyn Shepperson 11 October 2006

An excellent poem. Marilyn

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 11 October 2006

T. O.>>>Thought I was th' only one who applauded this philosophy...Lends much creedence to 'GUILTY BY ASSOSIATION', YES? WE LEARN, WE ADAPT, WE MODIFY, WE CIRCUMVENT....BUT THERE IS ALWAYS AN INFLUENCE, BE IT A GOOD OR BAD ONE...IT IS WE, TH' WORDSMITHS WHO MUST BE THE INFLUENCE ON TODAYS WORLD & MAKE AN IMPACT THAT WILL RESOUND AND BE HEEDED...SUPERIOR PIECE MS. OCEAN...'''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Patricia Gale 11 October 2006

I loved the last stanza, fantastic!

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