Sunday, August 7, 2016

Freedom-From Dark! Comments

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When dark becomes darker
Hovering awaits longer
Thirst gets scorched without quench
And claim abates in a trance.
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Partha Pratim Goswami
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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 26 August 2016

nice poem............. I memories the line which we learn in our school- Tamso Maa Sad Gamay.........(in Shanskrit) : ? ? remember? ? .)) : you have done a interesting work....I'm not saying...your poem shows...thanks Partha....your poetry skill is very good..best of luck Dear.

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Thank you for bringing the analogy but I think it was as follows Asato ma sat gamaya tamaso ma jyotir gamaya mrityur ma amritang gamaya Meaning as usual you know.

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Gandalf The Grey 08 August 2016

Happy independence day Partha

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Augustus Billy Mutebesi 07 August 2016

Hehee... this poem is interesting. Thanks a lot for sharing.

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you're most welcome

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