Thursday, May 23, 2013

Freedom For Syria... (What If) Comments

Rating: 5.0

What if I said no more water and no more food
What if I said no more clothes and no more shoes

What if blood was to drip in every corner of your lands
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Sidra Mohammad
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Saadat Tahir 22 July 2014

a balanced well rhymed and strong poem it lovingly and imploringly seeks peace in the poets homeland. a well written and touching reminder of the myriad horrors and mayhem unleashed in a great country... the cradle of civilization stands denuded and ravished. so sad v nice lines liked

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 May 2013

horrible condition of Syria I wrote a poem about Syria when thee sparked the wrath nice one keep the candle burning

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