Wednesday, January 7, 2009

*...Freedom For Palestine! ...* Comments

Rating: 3.6

My country, my people, my land
Oh do I wish to be with my people hand in hand
With all wars abolished and all pain gone
With death and pain vanished that has been accepted for very long
...
Read full text

Marria Attar
COMMENTS

gnicholsonphoenixwrappers

0 0 Reply
Aboda Awed 30 September 2009

LOVE this poem. touchs my feeling..where realy we r looking 4 feedom & justice..keep express 4 freedom & strongly feelings uhave.. iwish be yr friend here , im new member lol! Thz u ..

1 1 Reply
Rand El-khalaf 31 March 2009

I LOVE this poem! You express yourself impressively well. Not only do you you do that, but you also express the deep emotions of others, just like myself...and this is what makes a great poet! Sister, I also wish to be with my people hand in hand, and inshallah, this will be the case. Very soon. But like we say: patience is the key to: LIBERTY. Rand,

2 0 Reply
Mimi Fakhira 24 March 2009

Beautiful poem. A well expressed love for your country. I'm only 13 and I'm from Malaysia, but I'm also a Muslimah. I'm really sad for what happened there. My country tried all we can to help but it was really hard. Please check on my poem, Palestine. Salam, MIMI

0 1 Reply
Hazem Al Jaber 04 February 2009

its so beautiful full of power meaning dear sweet poet.. thank you for sharing.. hazem al..

1 0 Reply
Yasser Koor 11 January 2009

it isn't your country it is our country si i give u my hand to free this land.. no more blood no more shooting head no more mothers weep no more children dead we have the faith so we have to pray STOP, , is it hard word to say?

1 3 Reply
Sebastine Humaemo 07 January 2009

' I don’t see the reason on why an innocent child deserves to die I don’t see why a mother should look at her dead children and cry '... lines too strong making one feel, the real pain in your lines.....prayers always to stop innocnt being killed..........sebastine....

3 0 Reply
Close
Error Success