Freedom Fighters Poem by Zyw Zywa

Freedom Fighters

Rating: 5.0


In years of hunger
we workers on the land
long for a good sign

to return
to a free existence
and it has come

Thunder and darkness
The high lords mock
That is what happens!

They let us go
without cattle, we laugh
in their face and stay

supposedly
We secretly pack
go through the village at night

kill a child in every house
and point with the blood knives
at the gold and silver

as our wage of years
After a quick meal, we leave
a long caravan of wagons and cattle

We make it to the Sea of Reeds
before the army comes and
it starts hailing real stones

Doubters start to moan

Wednesday, March 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: doubt,freedom
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Exodus led by Moses (1440 bC)

Collection "From Sacred Scripts"
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 21 March 2019

I still know as yesterday, child killings at the time, it was an eerie time, the story about Moses was very impressive. Excellent poem, Zywa! Keep yourself inspired and it will all look good again for a giant beautiful poem. Really enjoyed your sublime poem, A huge 10 for you. With the best regards, Sylvia FC. God´s Blessings be greatest for you.

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