Tuesday, February 28, 2017

Freedom Bird Comments

Rating: 5.0

and What do birds see when they fly?
Scouting along infinities backyards
Canada... America...Mexico?
no, they see only land
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Susan Williams 17 March 2017

Yes! ! ! ! What a beautiful way to get your message across.... I think I will carry this message with me till the day I die- - - - -What do birds see when they fly? Scouting along infinities backyards Canada... America...Mexico? no, they see only land one land and only one land they don't see the hubris in nations or divisions of false geography- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - and I just have to praise this line - lines do not stretch into chalk meticulously etched by testosterone - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -and I love the words you chose: Scouting along infinities backyards they don't see the hubris in nations or divisions of false geography sliced into economic security meticulously etched by testosterone it is all just trajectory of syntax natural homeostasis flagpoles are something to perch on [love love love this line] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - a thousand 10's for this write, my friend

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 28 February 2017

If humans too feel same way as birds do! Freedom has no walls and barriers. Excellent thoughts impressively penned. Thanks for sharing.

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