Freedom At Midnight Comments

" At the stroke of twelve; midnight we earned freedom! Well! We did it! We waited, waited, waited, waited we waited not just six hours for dawn, but alas for sixty-five years in vain." Loved the stanza... and am reminded of the grueling past that tormented the vast swath of Indian peninsula under the predating power... Thanks

Sathya jee This poem shows how powerful your imagination and observations! wonderful composition! ! ! ! .......10++++

But still we are saying 'Mera Bharat Mahan' It's time to introspect for us. Nice writing! Please comment on my made in india

i echo Greenwolf's words and add your plea is real, it comes through clear. We do not need fanatics in our world. A excellent write 10++++

After reading this, I couldn't imagine not giving it a 10. The reference to the knot at the end was wonderful. That is exactly the way to put it. GW62

This is the effect of 'kali'! If we the great Indians can look inside and make efforts, we will see an India free from all the travails referred to!

may God save us all and protect every city in the world.i loved the poem keep writing

A well written heartfelt piece thankyou for sharing Chris

Strong urgent dose of patriotism to treat our country.Hats off 10+++++......Thanks a lot Sathya

a very powerful and patriotic poem. i hope if everyone realizes this, then life will become easy and the purpose of freedom will be achieved. surely a 10 for this gem.

Truth of life.....Inspite of all the bickerings saare jaha se accha hindusthan hamara.let us all make it still better place to live.possible with right education.Ignorance is the root casue of all those demons dwelling in human minds. Very well crafted poetry depicting the harsh reality.

Sathya, salute to your patriotic insight, Incredible India, a rich resourceful intellectual nation, even after years of freedom, struggles.. world's largest democracy's powerful failure.. we allow our system to be like in a way non reactive minds.. voices cut of... ministerial politcal webs... why dont people of India wake up to set right the constitutional principles.. inspirational 10 Rema

remarkable write, an eyeopener!

A very poignant and striking poem - hard-hitting at our corrupt politicians who have robbed mother India and still continue to do so... Good Read, Satya...

Freedom at midnight is reflecting truth. Today we have got freedom but our corrupt leaders were responsible for that.

Dear Sathya Narayana Ji A very timely well versed poem with a poetic concern and cry, which no body hears in India.We don't have freem as we are tied by isms of political stupidity. I think we need a secon Independance struggle. You are very correct in bringing out a beautiful poem.We need out freedom to say that 'FREEDOM IS MY/OUR BIRTH RIGHT' gOOD POEM A 10 greetings Satheesan rangorath

These are the days for money power and muscle power. The poor remain frustrated. The fanatics play havoc. Politicians have their pound of flesh. What poor helpless Mother India can do, if her children misbehave like this?

I read your poem on the Independence Day when it became all the more meaningful! If we follow two party system, the country may improve! - Raj Nandy

i hope so...thanks for sharing

Well friend, as I've said before I am not qualified to rate anyones' pooetry.I happen to like the subject matter very much because India has suffered so many carrion feeding on her ever since the Brits..So for the subject matter, a 10.