Monday, October 19, 2009

Freedom As Flight Comments

Rating: 4.8

My eyes boundless are unbent to kiss the sky.
Up, held not by fetters, but bird-free to fly.
Jet-flight mends my spirit with loftiness by
Me. Blue within my eye's view, vast and high.
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Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
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Kylie Lowe 03 November 2009

I know that its been said already but you are great with imagery

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 29 October 2009

A poem, which is in rhetorical, beautiful images and with bombastic!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 28 October 2009

A poem of high altitude overseeing some beautiful images.

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Lillian Thomas 27 October 2009

very nice imagery. Do you use a spell checker before you post?

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Wow! Wonderful Obinna and I can feel the freedom with all the excellent imagery you have contributed to this soaring poem. It is all rhymed beautifully too! 10 Karin

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Christos Rodoulla Tsiailis 26 October 2009

beautiful, so full of up-lifting words

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a wonderful flight in this so beautifuully penned poem...it let the mind soar....excellent one

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