Sunday, June 25, 2006

Freedom As A Wife Comments

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Can i be with you and not loose me?
If you had my heart, would i still be free?
Or would i live in bondage, bound to you?
Could all see me, would i shine through?
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Donna Nimmo
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Dee Daffodil 26 June 2006

Excellent write Donna! ! My sentiments exactly (in fact I wrote something similar in...'I May Stay With You Forever'. I like this poem! Hugs, Dee

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Francesca Johnson 26 June 2006

Hear, hear, Donna. A poem for all those women who lost their identities when they married. I enjoyed this one and will read more of your work. Love, Fran xx

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