Thursday, January 3, 2019

Freedom, A Mirage Comments

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In freedom if I search for freedom's fruits—
Sweet or sour— there's freedom nor free spirit,
And fear there's of getting caught in deep roots,
A song sings off tune, off pitch, out of beat.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Savita Tyagi 03 January 2019

Good sonnet. We like freedom but but not the risk it often poses. Living in safe environment with freedom to do what we want doesn't always sits. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes for a new year. Also thank you very much for visiting my page and for your comment.

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Aniruddha Pathak 04 January 2019

Thank you Savita Tyagi, as a discerning poet your views are always welcome, and feel free to point out if there is something amiss. Constructive criticism is fine with me because that is the way to improve.

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